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An Eddie & Susannah Dean fanfiction
[art found on deviantart.com]

Star Light, Star Bright




Disclaimer!!!! I do not own any of the character's featured in this story, they are respective property of Stephen King



note the very first part of this is from the book The Dark Tower: The Drawing of The Three]

"Look, Eddie!" she cried, pointing up.
He looked, and saw a single star gleaming on the breast of the night.
"Isn't it beautiful?"
"Yes," he said, and suddenly, for no reason, his eyes filled with tears. Just where had he been all of his goddamned life? Where had he been, what had he been doing, who had been with him while he did it, and why did he suddenly feel so grimy and abysmally be-shitted?
Her lifted face was terrible in it's beauty, irrefutable in this light, but the beauty was unknown to its possessor, who only looked at the star with wide wondering eyes, and laughed softly.
"Star light, star bright," she said, and stopped. She looked at him. "Do you know it, Eddie?"
"Yeah." Eddie kept his head down. His voice sounded clear enough, but if he looked up she would see that he was weeping.
"Then help me. But you have to look."
"Okay."
He wiped the tears into the palm of one hand and looked up at the star with her.
"Star light--" she looked at him and he joined her. "Star bright--"
Her hand reached out, groping, and he clasped it, one the delicious brown of light chocolate, the other the delicious white of a dove's breast.
"First star I see tonight," they spoke solemnly in unison, boy and girl for this now, not man and woman as they would be later, when the dark was full and she called to ask him if he was asleep and he said no and she asked if he would hold her because she was cold; "Wish I may, wish I might--"
They looked at each other, and he saw that tears were streaming down her cheeks. His own tears came again, and he let them fall in her sight. This was not a shame but an inexpressible relief.
They smiled at each other.
"Have the wish I wish tonight," Eddie said, and thought: Please, always you
"Have the wish I wish tonight," she echoed, and thought: If I must die in this odd place, please let it not be too hard and let this good young man be with me.
[the rest of this was written soley by wolvie]

Eddie and Susannah smiled at each other as they finished the song. He reached and gently wiped her tears away, and then wrapped his arms around her companionably, "Don't cry Suze."
She smiled more, resting lightly against him, "I'm sorry, I'll try not to."
He nodded, gently let her go, and scooted a little ways away from her, "Night."
Susannah noded, laying down and looking up at the stars, "Night Eddie."
They lay in silence for several minutes before she spoke up softly, "Eddie, you asleep?"
He smiled, "No, I can't sleep, you?"
She smiled more and turned to face him, "Me either...it's kinda cold out here under these stars."
He nodded and scooted over to her, wrapping his arms around her and pulling her over to him, "Yeah, it kinda is."
Susannah giggled a little, leaned over and kissed him gently for several minutes before pulling her lips away from his, "I'm sure a big boy like you can warm little ol' me up."

He returnd her kisses, blushing as he started to get an erection. He gently pulled away from her, and shivered.
She frowned, and grabed him tighter, "Eddie, what is sugar? What's wrong?"
He blushed a little more as their hips brush against each other, knowing that she had to have felt his excitement, "Just don't wanna ruin this night Sussannah," he said apologetically.
She gasped a little when she felt his excitement, then she smiled and turned his face to hers, gently kissing him again and nibbling lightly on his lip, "You better not be sorry Eddie Dean, I've seen the way ya look at me all the time, you think I can't see love in your eyes?" she smiled gently, and slid a hand between his legs, cupping his groin gently, "I know that you love me Eddie, and I want you to know that I love you two."
He returned her kisses, shivering when she nibbled on his lip. He starts to reply to her but got cut off when she grabed his cock through his worn jeans. A small moan escaped his lips as he looked at her very carefully before smiling back, "I do love you...but are you sure that you want to do this? We've only known each other 2 weeks now."
She smiled and squeezed him lightly, "I'm very sure, we probably won't get many chances while we're traveling around with ol' what is it you call him? Long, tall, and ugly right? Anyway, I think we ought to enjoy ourselves while he's gone, cuz there ain't no way in hell I'm doin anythin other then cuddlin with you when he's within earshot of us."

He smiled at her, "Yea you've got a point there Suze." slowly he reached up and gently cuped her breasts, squeezing lightly through her shirt.
She jumped then arched her back, moaning softly before gently pulling away, starting to strip for him.
He watched her in fascination as she revealed more, and more of her body to him, god...she's gorgeous he shivered and slowly unziped his pants, needing to let his cock have some air, and room.
She blushed lightly as she finished stripping, then smiled when she saw that he unzipped his pants, "Your turn sugar" she said, and smiled more when he noded and immediately started stripping his own clothes off for her. Wow....I'd never believe that he was a heroin addict not even a month ago...look at his muscles...his bodies amazing... she blushed furiously when her gaze looked down and she saw his erect member, "You are a big boy, Mr. Dean."
He blushed lightly at her words, letting his eyes wander along her body lovingly, "I love you Susannah."
She smiles more, and nodded, "I love you two Eddie."

She went and wrapped her arms tightly around his neck, "you ready sug?"
He nods and smiles, "Never been more ready babe" he gently kisses and bites at her neck smiling more when she shivers against him
She smiles back at him as he gently picks her up and positions her over his cock, "Suze...I love you" he says and shivers as he starts slowly and gently lowering her onto him.
She jumps a little and moans loudly as he enters her, "Oh Eddie...I love you two..."

He smiled softly at her and let go of her hips, "Let's see what you got babe."
She nodded, and started thrusting her hips slowly at first, then moaned softly when the pain turned to pleasure, and she started thrusting much faster.
He smiled more, "Oh god...there ya go...fuck...this is amazing," he looked up at the stars, and relaxed his body, allowing her to do all the work.
She moaned loudly, and bent down, pulling his face up to hers, kissing him aggressively, forcing her tongue past his lips.

The two made love for awhile before Susannah felt Eddie tense up below her, she smiled and playfully bit at his lip causing him to moan in pleasure, and cum deep inside of her. Susannah moaned and cumming with her lover, then smiled, "Wow Eddie..."
He nodded, panting heavily, "You were amazing Susannah."
She smiled, and gently got up, and cuddled close to him, putting her arms around him tightly, "I love you so much."
He smiled back, wrapping his own arms around her, and nuzzled Susannah lightly, "I love you too."
A few minutes later, the two lovers were deep asleep under the strange stars of Roland's world.

The End

[nother note: edited by kimi ^^ yay]

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2009-07-07 [wolvie]: or will i? dum dum dum :D

2009-07-07 [Ritsuka-Kun]: hmmmmmmmmmmm you should?

2009-07-07 [wolvie]: well then fine :D

2009-07-07 [Ritsuka-Kun]: yay :D

2009-07-07 [wolvie]: yesh :D

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2009-07-07 [wolvie]: T :D yesh ^^

2009-07-07 [Ritsuka-Kun]: woo epict :D

2009-07-07 [wolvie]: XD

2009-07-07 [Ritsuka-Kun]: yesh XD

2009-07-08 [Ritsuka-Kun]: ooooooooooooooooooooooooh

2009-07-08 [wolvie]: i didn't do it!

2009-07-08 [Ritsuka-Kun]: well damn then who do did?

2009-07-08 [wolvie]: ummmmmmmmm...brian!

2009-07-08 [Ritsuka-Kun]: damn him XD

2009-07-08 [wolvie]: yesh :D

2009-07-08 [Ritsuka-Kun]: cha :D

2009-07-09 [wolvie]: itty bit more :D

2009-07-09 [wolvie]: crappy ending I know but meh

2009-07-09 [Ritsuka-Kun]: awe :D

2009-07-10 [wolvie]: spell checked woot :D

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